With only the littlest bit to go before I turn in revisions on my contracted book, I thought today I would offer a peek at my next historical WIP. Background to the scene: girl dressed as boy to travel without harassment, trouble in a tavern, help from an (unwelcome) source :)
“Boy? Are you really that blind?” spoke
the elegant, skeptical voice of the man whose table I’d knocked into. From his
tone, I would never have guessed he was anything but cold sober.
Before either Weasel or Brawler could object to his intervention, the
man stood and pulled the shapeless felt hat off my head. With deft fingers, he
found and released the pins so that my hair fell in a mass of twisted plaits
about my face and shoulders.
Brawler gaped at me as though I’d sprouted horns, and Weasel hissed a
vicious breath. The surprise was just enough for me to free my left hand and elbow
Brawler across the chin. I stomped for Weasel’s foot, but his grip had
tightened round my wrist until my fingers were numb and I knew I couldn’t hold
onto my blade much longer. So I let myself go limp, my dead weight dragging
Weasel off balance while my free left hand reached for the second blade
strapped beneath my tunic. I brought it up and under his chin . . . where it
met and matched with a second, longer, deadlier dagger.
The stranger with the courtly voice didn’t say anything. He didn’t have
to. Weasel narrowed his eyes, but let go of me. Not without a twist that made
me wince, but he and Brawler retreated under the stony gaze of the man who had
come so unexpectedly to my aid.
When they were gone, I found the stranger staring at me. His expression
had not altered from indifference. “You’re welcome,” he said.
The arrogance and detachment were too much for my frayed temper. “I
didn’t ask you to interfere. I’m old enough to take care of myself.”
He raised a skeptical eyebrow. “And how old is that?”
“Twenty-two,” I said defiantly. Then, at his look of open disbelief, I
conceded, “Eighteen.” When he continued to stare at me, I added, “In three
months.”
“I suppose you would take it amiss if I suggested that disreputable
taverns are not the safest place for a solitary young woman.”
“I suppose you would take it amiss if I suggested that drowning your
sins in wine is the refuge of a coward.”
He had a stare like ice, the kind that froze in England and provided but
a thin covering to the depthless water beneath it. Here was someone much more
dangerous than the thugs who had just been run off. This, I thought with
sinking heart, was not a man to cross swords with. Perhaps politeness would be
the better part of valor.
But then he spoke again. “You were nearly quick enough, I grant you. But
‘nearly’ will get you killed. Perhaps if your skills were as formidable as your
tongue you wouldn’t need a stranger’s intervention.”
Despite the drinking and choice of tavern, I noted the marks of quality
about him: the diction and music of his voice, the grace of his every movement
despite the slight hesitation of the seriously drunk, the shirt that—though
aged by hard use and indifferent laundering—was made from the finest linen. So
fine that one could almost see the outlines of a well-conditioned body beneath
it . . .
Hurry up with the rest!!! I want more!!!
ReplyDeleteKeep going! I just have the details of the scene in my mind now :) :) :)
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