Tuesday, February 15, 2011

Chapter 13 in its Entirety

CHAPTER THIRTEEN

MINUETTE WITH MARY; STEPFATHER? AND GILES

ELIZABETH AND ROBERT—HE FINDS OUT WHERE MINUETTE IS?

WHAT IS ROCHFORD DOING? HIS WIFE?

ENDS OCTOBER 31ST WITH NORFOLK’S DEATH, GILES’ ARREST, MARY’S CONFINEMENT

I would have warned you that it contained spoilers . . . but I think spoilers require full sentences. This is the only chapter in this entire rewrite that will be wholly new. Which I'm clearly having trouble with. That's the bad news.

The good news is that Chapters 14 and 15 will split twenty pages of story I already have. And then I'll be done.

Do you think I'd have better luck if I just skipped 13 altogether, like Las Vegas hotels? Maybe if I call it chapter 14 I'll get past the unintelligible thoughts.

Probably not.

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